So I wrote this a long time ago when I was born into the world of PotO... like when I was new to it.
Annnyyways, The first stanza I thought of Christine and the second stanza I thought of Erik. It's basically their thoughts. The third stanza was both off their thoughts together. Now, you may see it a different way. You may be the oppposite of my opinion. It may just be all Erik's thoughts and it may be just Christine's. That's all up to you... and I would like to know what you all see
CRITIQUES VERY MUCH WANTED and appreciated as I have never really been critiqued on my poetry before.